20081215

Ground

A 'read and respond' type of verse... haven't done this in much too long, but I like the way things turned out... sometimes a little inspiration is needed :)


Ground

Unsteady ground lies beneath
empty fields of sand
watching you drown by my hand
falling underneath

Illusions scream soft their lies
never knowing truth
lost in ever-loving youth
growing oft more wise

One more trip around we take
til our days of death
understanding found in breath
fairy tale in wake

I feel you still, all around
angst and love akin
it is from here we doth begin
on unsteady ground

- 15 December, 2008

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